Brian Ingebretsen
3/6/14
ENGL 1A
Peer
Review Follow-Up Script
A) The classmates’ whose papers I read had some
interesting ideas but need to work on the flow of their writing. Their
sentences stop too abruptly and are usually there as filler which isn’t bad but
they do not have a sentence to fill.
B) I received one omnipresent gripe and that was
that I had failed to put an academic article, the whereabouts of which are
currently pending. Other than that I only have a few punctuation errors and
some awkward lines and also my conclusion needs work.
C) They did help a lot because my essay is far from
perfect, I know that, and they had some pretty good, yet obvious advice that I
will definitely use in my revision. My main mission right now is to find an
article.ft
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