Differences

Differences
Dare to Define

Wednesday, April 30, 2014

Presentation Reactions

Brian Ingebretsen
4/28/14
ENGL 1A
Spencer, Melissa, Thai
Altered State of Legality
Positive
• great eye contact and strong voices
• very passionate about their project
Negatives
•  Too fast on slides and didn’t explain as well as they could have
• Didn’t breakdown their charts or statistics
Dana, Thor, Ben, JB
Show me the money
Positives
• Clear and concise voices
• Dana, Ben and JB were confident about their topic
Negative
• Thor seemed to have been stuttering and looked nervous
Matt, Jose, Brett
Fast food in America
Positives
·         Presentation was fun and the delivery was interesting
·         Enthusiastic about their topic
·         Interaction
Negatives
·         Way over the time limit

·         Cussing

Tuesday, April 29, 2014

Response

Brian Ingebretsen
4/29/14
ENGL 1A
Response Paper

This group project was a learning experience for all three of us. We learned the value of teamwork and individual journalism and applied those factors to our work. Our project has a mixture of humor, seriousness and sincerity which we believe to be the perfect formula for a fantastic presentation. Our facts are accurate and our sources are legitimate with all participants doing their fair share of the work. Each of us have found our own information to help contribute to our project and have made a great connection for our friendship as well.

Monday, April 14, 2014

Response 3

Brian Ingebretsen
4/14/14
ENGL 1A
Response #3
Fletcher, Ed. "Crime - Sacto 911." The Sacramento Bee. N.p., n.d. Web. 14 Apr. 2014
            Fletcher reports on a prostitution case that has happened right here in the city of Sacramento which emphasizes the point that sex trafficking can happen anywhere. The culprit was found to have been pimping women out of a south Sacramento home after neighbors noted such oddities as continuous male guests and constant running of electricity. This article brings a sense of realism to a problem that is usually broadcasted to be in other countries or just other states in general and was written for those who live in Sacramento.

Walter, Seanna. "Prostitution Ring Article Was Underplayed." The Columbus Dispatch. N.p., n.d. Web. 14 Apr. 2014

Walter brings to light that prostitution is usually swept under the rug when it comes to the media as she writes a rebuttal to a recent article regarding the break-up of a ring. She notes that the section discussing the prostitution was only mentioned on the back as a small story when it actually should’ve been front page news. The discovery of kidnapped girls ranging from 13-17 apparently isn’t as important as some other media dubbed event like the super bowl. This article is meant to enrage the populous and get them to realize that prostitution and trafficking are a very real problem in this country and we downsize it to the point where everything is ok.

Tuesday, April 1, 2014

Spring Break essay

Brian Ingebretsen
4/1/14
ENGL 1A
Frozen Majesty

Over Winter Break, I was offered the greatest pleasure that any child or adult would revel in; a trip to the Magic Kingdom of Disneyland. This, however, was no ordinary Disney trip; instead I was treated to the magnificence of the happiest place on Earth blanketed in snow and glad tidings and, being it the first time being to Disneyland during winter, I fell in love with the warmth that the frosted-over park exuded. Usually when I take the yearly trip to the Magic Kingdom it’s in the summer where the sun is high and there is an omnipresence of shorts and tank tops. Since I am used to the warm weather and abundance of ice cream, traversing the park in the highest point of winter really seemed like a culture shock, not just weather-wise but experience-wise too. I gaped in awe as the Disneyland I was used to transformed into a literal winter wonderland with fantastic scenery and beautiful decorations, I knew I was in a magic kingdom. Sleeping Beauty’s castle was draped in beautiful white powder and covered from top to bottom with lights that pierced through the winter chill and left a warm feeling. A giant Christmas tree overlooked the park in all of its glory and even the Disney characters, who roamed around, got into the holiday spirit, I still regret not taking a picture with Donald Duck in a sweater. The demographics included humans of all ages, races and sexes and it really brought me joy to see all of these diverse people getting along in harmony, kind of like a small bubble of frozen paradise. This is one of the main reasons why I love going to Disneyland, the kingdom is always joyful and is never plagued with such social problems that the real world faces. Everyone can enjoy all the rides, all the food, and all of the landmarks that have been made famous by the previous Disney films. During my trip I journeyed through the park locating all of the subtle differences between the winter and summer versions and I wasn’t disappointed. The differences ranged from subtle to extravagant, subtle coming in the form of differently costumed characters and extravagant being an understatement for attractions like the Haunted Mansion Christmas. The Haunted Mansion is transformed into the movie ride for Nightmare before Christmas and it is all the more wonderful, I almost wish they kept it up for the entire year but that would ruin the magic I presume. Disneyland during the winter is truly a treasure to behold but if I were given a ticket to anywhere in the world I would pick Italy for a number of cheesy romantic reasons. First off, I have never been to Europe so it would be an appropriate time to visit one of the most romantic cities in the Union where you can travel by water and gawk at all the wonderful areas around. I would also like to explore the natural meadows of the Italian landscape and look at the history as well as the old fashioned. I would love to hear the language of love being spoken, falling smoothly out of the mouths of the native speakers. I would want to sit at a cafĂ© and watch as time slows and becomes a part of the rippling of the calm water. Going to Italy has been a dream of mine ever since I was a little kid because I always had a likeness for natural age and history. I love Venice and I would love to ride down in a boat with someone truly special while looking up into the clear sky. I would love to see the history and majesty of Rome, all of the statues and dilapidated buildings just oozing with history. I would love to take a few weeks and just explore the grand country with as much depth as I could possibly see. That being said, though, Disneyland has always been my favorite place of all time and seeing it for the first time in December cemented that fact. There will never be a place as magical as the Magic Kingdom.